She never came home – not that night, nor the next;
and now weeks have passed and here I am,
still waiting.
She never came home, and sometimes I wonder
if somehow it was my fault, that maybe
I could have stopped her.
Maybe I could have said something, anything,
to let her know how much I loved her.
How much I still love her –
but how can I tell her something now?
She’s gone.
She never came home – and a piece of me left with her
that night, when she disappeared.
I will never get that piece back,
but I fill it with everything I can:
music, art, friends and family.
I shove it all into that hole in my heart
Hi everyone! I just posted two sonnets and I would like people such as yourselves to critique them, if you don't mind and have some time to spare. Please take a look at them and let me know what you think. Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day!
Hi, I was wondering if I could join? Quick question if I do join, I have a story that is a chapter story, but also a fanfiction story, where would I put it under as??
Hi - I am newer to the group. I have put in a couple of times things to folders and it is saying 1 submission every 365 days. Not sure if this is what should be happening as your rules are suggesting more deviations can be submitted.
Hi - you may have fixed this already. I submitted to free verse, chapters without issue. If I see this again I will alert you as I have no more to submit.